Exercise #855: Ten Words
Use these ten words in your SUB:
Do your best to make your piece tell a story. "Extra credit" for using the words in the order given and/or doing this exercise in 75 words or less.
Critiquers, this one will be more difficult to critique as authors tend to run short on their SUBs. Likely the best approach to these is the Wildacres Seven Steps Technique.
Word limit: 1200
Please use the subject line:
SUB: Exercise #855/yourname