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Exercise #857

Exercise #857: Scene
Posted  6/26/20

In a quiet suburban neighborhood, an old man hobbles along the sidewalk, using a pool cue as a cane.

Show how we got here or what happened next.

Critiquers, along with standard grammar and spelling review, you might tell us if you found the story believable. How well did the author show us the scene?

Note the larger word limit.

Word limit: 1500
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