Exercise #877: Beginning Line
Use this as the beginning line for your SUB:
Through the window, I could see him standing on the front lawn.
You may change the gender, if you like.
Critiquers, along with the usual critique points, you might also note how well the story flows with the beginning line.
Please note the larger word limit.
Word limit: 1500
Please use the subject line:
SUB: Exercise #877/yourname