Exercise #906: Beginning Line
Use this as the beginning line for your SUB:
We had hoped, but it came back to haunt us.
Need an extra challenge? Use this as both the first and last line of your piece.
Critiquers, along with the usual critique points, you might also note how well the story flows with the beginning line.
Please note the larger word limit.
Word limit: 1500
Please use the subject line:
SUB: Exercise #906/yourname