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Exercise #1031: Scene
Posted  5/24/24

AToday’s Scene comes from Seth. Thanks, Seth!

A twenty-three year old man wants to adopt a sixteen year old orphan girl. The law allows it.

Start your SUB with:
“Stop this nonsense!” I/she/he banged the table.

Show how we got here or what happens next.

Critiquers, along with standard grammar and spelling review, you might tell us if you found the story believable. How well did the author show us the scene?

Note the larger word limit.

Word limit: 1500
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             SUB: Exercise #1031/yourname

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