Exercise #311: Scene Posted 4/10/09
Today's exercise comes from Steven Williamson.
A carpool van with eight passengers has just had a collision or near miss while on the morning highway commute.
With your SUB, show us how we got to this point, or what happens next.
Critiquers, note if the story is believable. How well did the author lead us to the point of the scene, or give us a resolution?
Word limit: 1200 Please use the subject line: SUB: Exercise #311/yourname
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