Exercise #383: Beginning Line Posted 8/27/10
Today’s exercise comes from Mellissa Green.
Use this as the beginning line for your SUB:
The note read, “You have something of mine, and I want it back.”
Critiquers, along with the usual critique points, you might also note how well the story flows with the beginning line.
Word limit: 1200 Please use the subject line: SUB: Exercise #383/yourname
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