Exercise #496: Scene Posted 11/30/12
Today’s Scene:
A naked man lies on a table, under a sheet and blanket; he is cozy, warm and relaxed. The masseuse is nowhere to be seen.
Show how we got here or what happened next.
Critiquers, along with standard grammar and spelling review, note if the story is believable. How well did the author show us the scene?
Note the larger word limit.
Word limit: 1500 Please use the subject line: SUB: Exercise #496/yourname
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