Exercise #535: Scene
Beside a lonely country road, a man stands next to a bicycle. He pokes at something with a stick.
Show how we got here or what happened next.
Critiquers, along with standard grammar and spelling review, note if the story is believable. How well did the author show us the scene?
Note the larger word limit.
Word limit: 1500
Please use the subject line:
SUB: Exercise #535/yourname