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Exercise #542: Beginning Line
Posted 10/25/13
 

Use this as the beginning line for your SUB:

It went in, but as I watched, it came right back out again.

Critiquers, along with the usual critique points, you might also note how well the story flows with the beginning line.

Please note the larger word limit.

Word limit: 1500
Please use the subject line:
             SUB: Exercise #542/yourname

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