Exercise #549: Scene Posted 12/13/13
Today's Scene comes to us from Tyger:
A middle-aged couple walk hand in hand in a city where nobody walks, along a busy six-lane highway. They seem at ease.
Show how we got here or what happened next.
Critiquers, along with standard grammar and spelling review, note if the story is believable. How well did the author show us the scene?
Note the larger word limit.
Word limit: 1500 Please use the subject line: SUB: Exercise #549/yourname
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