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Exercise #593: Scene
Posted  10/24/14

A woman crouches alone in a garden, buttocks on her heels, head down, eyes covered by her folded arms.

Show how we got here or what happened next.

Critiquers, along with standard grammar and spelling review, note if the story is believable. How well did the author show us the scene?

Note the larger word limit.

Word limit: 1500
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