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Exercise #709: Scene
Posted 4/28/17
A white car enters a drug store parking lot and parks in a secluded section. The trunk pops open and a lanky teenager unfolds himself from the trunk, gets out, shuts the trunk and gets into the passenger side of the car.
Show how we got here or what happened next. (I actually saw this happen and can’t figure out why!)
Critiquers, along with standard grammar and spelling review, you might tell us if you found the story believable. How well did the author show us the scene?
Note the larger word limit.
Word limit: 1500
Please use the subject line:
SUB: Exercise #709/yourname
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